Poem: Aging

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By barranca

The slightly deaf

Ringing ears itch,

The gray, slightly

Dim eyes blur and water,

The feet ache.

The hair fades and balds,

The joints stiffen.

The nose is ripped,

The lungs ooze

Dread inches closer,

And yet:

The world stirs and beckons to

One more blue day,

One more glass of fine wine,

One last embrace,

One startled birdsong,

One green vision,

One more raid on the unspeakable.

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Ralph Deeds profile image

Ralph Deeds Level 6 Commenter 4 years ago

It's not all that bad!

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barranca Hub Author 4 years ago

I'm glad you are aging gracefully!

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spacebull 4 years ago

Hey, not one, but much more than one ;) I like your poem, thanks ;)

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barranca Hub Author 4 years ago

glad you liked it.....

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cgull8m 4 years ago

Good one, hope to see more great poems. Cheer.

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donna bamford 14 months ago

I like this one too. Just thought I'd pay a visit. You're not publishing much these days. Poet's bloc or just plain busy?

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barranca Hub Author 14 months ago

Hi Donna, Thanks for stopping by. Maybe just some combination of the two. Haven't felt inspired.

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csebooks 4 weeks ago

You know you're growing old when your friends are writing poems about growing old. BTW my first album was Rolling Stones Now! Favorite song: Heart of Stone; loved the bluesy guitar riff!

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barranca Hub Author 4 weeks ago

Csebooks, I will try not to write another one.

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